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Then the Titans were attacked by newly reformed Ouranous and Gaia, their parents, and the Gods sliced the Titans back into pieces, and then I ask...
Haha I was bores
Then I realize I broke my ankle for no apparent reason and then I teleported to the doctor
I might give up soon
Oh hey I found the original feedback thread
@cheesemuffin COUSIN!!!!!
Great story, needs more emotion and descriptive words. Try replacing a noun and an adjective with a word that represents both. You're a female so...
Then I laugh so much my left lung hurts
COUSIN!!!
And tired because it was like 2 AM and I couldn't really think that well
Lol just this one chapter. Not anymore I won't. I was bored
What do u ppl think?
Chapter 2: The image above my head faded, as the centaur led me to a series of cabins. From one of the cabins came a girl, around my age, with...
Might be a while. I'm thinking of ideas
You know what guys? I give up on this story. GOODBYE
Chapter 1: I still couldn't explain how I survived. Or the reason why some bozo clubbed me on the head. I managed to catch one line before I...
Bump
Should I continue the story?
Prologue: Run. The only thought I had the moment I woke up. I was on an erupting volcano. Like an idiot, I stopped and turned to look at the...