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" I'm Lilly I only came yesterday"
Heres a bit of mine The quest: the blooming lily Prologue A misty shape appeared out of the shadows walking slowly towards a...
Okay I'll try your tips
In Walks in the cafe "hey anyone in here"
Thanks you two
Please post comments thanks
Hoped you liked the prologue please post feedback on the feedback thread. Heres the next part: Chapter 1 Lilly woke with a start...
This is the feedback thread for my new story!!!!!!
This is my first story I've ever written properly Please dint comment on here comment on the feedback thread There will probably be more in the...
Out WTF burning
Out Cool I'll check it out too
Coolio I likes it
Okay thank all
Starts to heal wounds with special powered "humph"
"I have stoped can't you see" Sits down in shadow spot
Pushes shadow back and sits down Lily raises her hand and wounds heal up
Out Does karate lol In picks it up and slashes it at shadow
"just cause I'm a girl doesn't mean I can't fight"
Stands up holding huge sword "well if you don't....."
Pulls out a sword from back " care to stop boys"