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I'm glad you put some paragraphs in ^-^ make sure to make the dialogue as clear as possible.. And maybe try not to jump around from character to...
Soon, an ambulance was there. The paramedics brought me to the hospital with them. While I was in the hallway, they did some kind of flush. I'm...
*flashback* It was the first time I had gone out walking. My parents had had a fight, and I couldn't take it anymore. I just walked out the door....
Tash ;)
The boy leans back, and swallowed a huge handful of pills. For a moment, I am stunned. Why would he do that? He could be a drug user, but......
This is an accidental double post. ^-^ please view the other one ^-^
At this moment, I'm walking. I like to do that sometimes. Aside from school, walking around like this is the only thing I do. Well, I do things at...
My name is Ana. Well, everyone calls me Luana, but maybe that's because nobody knows me well enough to give me a nickname. My real name is Luana...