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:O I'm so sorry I didn't update! Thanks for reading!! I'll update as soon as I can ^-^
I am so glad you guys like it ^-^ I will update tomorrow!!
I will update again in a couple days :) ~~~~~~~~~~~~ I sighed. Earl was leaning back in the swing set, making faces at me. "Are you coming, or...
Haters, maybe guys story isn't perfect, but if don't like it, write your own story!! XD It's fun, and there few of them.
No! Please not the brains!!! And I feel.. Hypnotized, add if someone is whispering "more more.. More" to me! XD Thanks for reading, guys ^-^ sorry...
^o^ thanks! Should I continue?
Please update asap :D
BUMP please update again soon!!! :o
The woman at the entrance desk gave us directions to the children's in-patient wing with a grateful smile. It was on the fourth floor. I heard a...
XD thanks a lot for reading, guys!! More is coming ;)
When people are talking, make a new paragraph when the speaker changes. Like this: "Hello," he said. "Hi, Joe! How are you?" She replied. "Good."...
Update soon, princess!!!!!
:D you bet!!
This looks like it will be interesting!! :) In the first paragraph, one thing that I saw was that it needed was question marks at the end of each...
The luscious vehicle pulled into the parking lot. I, being wedged in between two big jocks, had to wait to get out. I found it odd that they all...
I was brought out of my thoughts as it started to rain. The woman and her toddlers were gone; they probably had been for a while. How long was I...
After we got home from the hospital, it was late in the night. It appeared like I actually was at the hospital for a few hours, because my parents...
Guys, cool it! It's just a game here, so you guys shouldn't make it so personal! :o Hulkzord, you could try making the sentences be more...
Thanks, Elaname ^-^ ..... LOL whatta troll XD
XD pretty silent over here... What do you guys think?? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Despite the way I acted towards him, I was actually worried about Earl....