Separate names with a comma.
Make your own thread, OP, not someone else's.
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Still needs a lot more detail and body to your story. It needs some work.
You kept me hooked all the way through it. Excellent work.
They don't.
Me gusta!! Write/post more!!!
So you want positive feedback only, because negative feedback comes from uninterested people? I'm interested in your story, but honestly, it does...
Depends, how awesome is Herobrine?
Leave.
Spam. Get off forums. Kthxbai.
Don't bump. No support.
Needs: Effort Info Effort Color (highly suggested) Effort Variation Effort More than thirty words (at least) Effort Brainpower Effort Picture(s)...
Humiliated*
It's funny how he continues to fight after he's been humiliate by nearly everyone that's come here.
Not all roleplay is sexual or immature, you stereotypical bastards. Look at this. My name is not Invincible1707. Roleplay. Playing a role. -.-
...and you legitimately assumed that this WOULDN'T happen? -facepalm-
RSVP through Kaw_admin? Fail troll. Get out.
Add more to all of your stories, especially this one.
First matrix is definitely best compared to the rest.
Or the Matrix Trilogy.