Separate names with a comma.
Decent guide, but think about putting other important things like info, people/places you got it from. Otherwise, you are on the right lines.
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Thanks, phoenix!
What I have of my story so far: Two men with large wings and halos appear floating and gazing down at a small village called, "Angel Falls". One...
Should I start a story?
*destiny, not desting.
"H-Hello?" The voice of a woman sounds through the skies. "I-If you are there, sh-show yourself at once." "How long have us Guardians existed?"...
woo?
Yep. I drew it.
[img] Apparently, I have a drawing entitled revolution...
:lol: :lol: :lol: Anyways, bump!
Feather, Anon, Go piss on eachother near a wall. After that, apologize to eachother. Then be even and be friends Feather, this is a story, not a...
He used to be mod, idiot.
Blue, there were tons of threads just before you came here.
Hey feather, i was already calm.
toxic, calm down.
And i request that "tits" and "tit" be filtered.
Guys! Just calm yo tits!
FeatherHunter, calm yo tits.
Do not put parentheses. Describe your characters and actions more clearly and make the reader drawn in to the story.