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I'm not sure about the end. I had total writers block for that part.
Here's the next part of The Colosseum. If you could edit it that would be great! I glanced around again, hoping that I had just overlooked the...
Okay, thanks. All of you guys are being super helpful!
Yea that's what i'm doing for the next part.
Yeah
Future. Thanks for the help! It's much appreciated.
Oh, but what is his weapon?
Great, perfect! He's one of the main characters. And thanks.
Yea that's why I want some feedback
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Okay guys thanks!
Thanks! And yea... Kinda learned my lesson. But I was extremely bored...
Can some please check out my story? It's called The Colosseum. Thanks.
Everyone knows that first impressions are important. You know, your first impression of something can completely change how you think of it for...
There is more on the actual thread for it.
It is called The Colosseum. Coralie's POV I opened my eyes. Slowly, all of my senses came back to me, as if they had been lost in the wind. First...
Can some one tell me what they think of my story? I'll post the beginning on here.
Awwwwww... If no one says anything, does that mean no one likes it? Or does it mean that I shouldn't have made this thread at six in the morning?
I must admit, I freaked out. But I think I had a right to be pissed. I mean, what kind of people bring a normal 16-year-old girl to the COLOSSEUM...
Re: The Story Index The Colosseum akai41 Page 1/2-ish at moment.