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Let's see if I can finish it before I have to go.
Umm is this like Harry potter ?
Lol
Yay finally I get a character and yes i do read your story.
Lol yea I have it's just that I'm a lil bit too busy to be writing a story ATM. Rofl.
Except for me im a robot
Brilliant absolutely positively remarkable. :D
Maybe they have to release Zan to defeat the zorgons but when he is released .........,
Hmm about someone that absorbs powers? Can that be zans power? His weakness: He has to weaken his target before absorbing their powers. Bio: He...
He is going to be earth villain just to clarify it for you, now I need 2 more villains preferable older ones, like around 20s ish lol.
Change Zan. His new power instead if telekinesis is to basically be able to transform into a werewolf. He can change whenever he likes, it's not...
Nice job. Is angels new name hell ? Can't wait for the next chapter :D
Umm I sorta can't tell you that lol, btw I'm going to use your character as a villain.
Yea same here, it's pretty funny, but I was wondering if it was real?? Who is rak, is that you??
Yay
Lol whenever I finish posting I always have something else to write lol. I still need characters. 3 villans please post some. Btw the man in...
I'll edit them when I get the chance Ive got to go, life has gotten real busy, if you guys find anything else wrong with the story please post...
Oh and thanks I'll try have the next chapter up soon.
Kk I'll make sure to edit the errors and I'll try not make them anymore.
Oh haha I thought you were a new reader :D