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And I only write because I love books. Read Kane Chronicles, Percy Jackson, etc etc.
I'm trying my hardest; here's a hint, I'm only 9, so I'm writing stories like these to get a feel for writing. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I...
Chapter 3: Newcomer I woke, and dawn hadn't struck. I decided to let my squad members sleep; it was our day off. I walked around the camp,...
And SR, actually, I have a whole series, and another book that don't follow hers. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Pielord- your right. I'm doing exactly what she's doing, but making it my version, and trying to get hers some credit.
Then we moved on to our last lesson, tactics. Hawk was there, and he said, "Now, take a careful look at this room. Absorb what you see, because...
Chapter 2: Lessons [Thank you, sister dear, for letting me have the mic] Maverick's POV I woke up, dawn just coming. I woke up my fellow...
A voice, bright and cheery, said, "Welcome to Battle Camp! This will be your new home, and you will be squadded up with other people! There is: 1...
Now, this is my first book in my new series: The Battle Camp! Please tune in! Chapter 1: Memories of Blank [Maverick, give me the mic!] [Fine...
Making new series: Battle Camp! Please don't post on my story! (this or the new one.)
Disclaimer: This is going to be a very short book! ~ We fought and fought, and it was well past noon. And we had only a few of Crevlok's army, and...
I woke up and strolled through the academy. Everyone was back to lessons as usual. I had finished mine, so I walked outside to my favorite maple...
^End of Book 2. Book 3 coming out now.
Everyone was staring at me, but I walked into the city, flanked by The Band. We casted protective spells among the city to keep the area safe when...
A light. Bright light. Tunnel, falling. Falling. Falling. My eyes flew open, and the Healer gasped. The Healer ran out, yelling. I fell asleep. I...
Army's POV We all rushed out, seeing Secret getting shot by an arrow. We ran, attacking the Trolls. We grabbed Secret's body, and ran back to...
I ran for their food supply, which was full of meat and fruit, and got as much as I could carry. The Trolls attacked, and the raiders ran off. We...
I went back to our main camp, where the wounded were being tended to by the Healers of the city. I got to my tent and lit a small fire. I roasted...
The cannonball sailed through the air, and hit Crevlok. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I woke with a start. I realized it was morning, and the sun...
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