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Matthew was awoken from his thoughts when there was a knock on the door. Matthew groaned, stumbled to the door and yanked it open. At the door was...
Lol And thank you for Reading my story Han x
Lol Thanks for Reading my story
New bit posted
Today was the day. The day Matthew had to go into court to testify that he didn't kill his own sister! Matthew stared blankly at a photo hanging...
Have just poste the start of chapter 2
Chapter 2: Matthew groaned and pulled himself out of bed. He turned himself around on his bed to look outside, it was a bright sunny morning...
Matthew could only remember bits of what that happened that night. Him and Elizabeth were walking home from the restraunt. It was awfully quiet...
"Umm.... Mate you know you have to buy that to read it." Matthew ripped the paper up in anger. "Stuff your stupid paper" He yelled at the salesman...
I have posted a new bit but I posted it before I read your feedback so there might be the same problem
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, my English teacher really gets at me for that! I'll work on it! Thanks! Han x
Daily mail: "On the 22nd of July a body of a young girl was found lying in an alley way. This is a very strange case because she was lying in what...
@ Seth73 I loved Endgame so much!!! When I read it I'd thought i try to write a story but failed :( Now I have one (My Sister's Killer) in...
It's my first story so I really need feedback! Han x
"Help me! Help! Help!" She screamed at the top of her voice. As it drew closer she started to whimper. "Help me..." "Don't be frightened my dear....
does this work
Luved it sooo much but the ending woz rushed a bit
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