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"The wind? That's the missing wall." Star says. "And Irin, to was Jerad who broke the ceiling and wall." He appears to be straining, as if...
It's short, low quality and has a >1% of being used probably. Plus the magma thing is probably too unrealitic.
Star heard multiple cracks as the structure was weakening. -I hate magic, but for once I need it.- He mentally complains.
Star surveyed the structure. The roof was barely holding and there were only 3 walls. He was worried the cieling would collapse down or worse:...
"No, I was talking to Feather." Star says with obvious sarcasm. "And my comment..." Star shocks Jerad with lightning, forcing him to the ground....
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread That's why I reminded.
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread Go farm the out of IRONhulk. I'm too busy right now.
Still tring to figure out what BAMF means... I think I may know. But you should try another short story.
Star let out a sigh and moved Irin onto a chair. "That's going to cost you." He said. "2 holes in the ceiling... 1 wall missing... Windows...
"Irin?" Star yells worrily. "How did I not see this coming? At least I could fix the windows..."
Is this about a story of some sort?
Star waited in the eerie silence of the old cafe. He had begun the repairs for Irin, and was replacing the windows, and left a tarp over the holes...
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread I'm thinking this needs a title change.
Star glanced around in panic. Why wasn't Jerad waking up? Unconcious body, 2 broken windows, a shattered ceiling, a blood stain... Irin wasn't...
But, Karma caught up to Star. A large chunk of ceiling debris suddenly came crashing down on him.
Of course, He was unprepared for the stun bolt that hit him dead on. "Oops." Star laughs.
It's a dead thread.
"Je parle français." Star said to Stora as he leaves.
"Well, I'm out." He says and calmly walks out the door. -Out- bbl everyone! -In-
*cafe