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    The Writer's Café

    I know i've said this 100 times but PLEASE COMMENT ON MY STORY, "Picking Up The Pieces". i will bump feedback thread with link.
    Post by: Bremen, Nov 8, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Picking up the Pieces - FEEDBACK

    Bumpppieee
    Post by: Bremen, Nov 6, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Picking Up The Pieces

    Part Four I begin to glance around. It is later in the day and alot more people finally come out from there corners. My friend smirks, and then...
    Post by: Bremen, Nov 4, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Picking up the Pieces - FEEDBACK

    Bump. Will post more if commented on!
    Post by: Bremen, Nov 2, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    The Writer's Café

    I would like feedback on my story, "Picking Up the Pieces." I would like to hear opinions, all positive and negative. And anyone here besides me...
    Post by: Bremen, Oct 26, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Picking up the Pieces - FEEDBACK

    Bump?
    Post by: Bremen, Oct 26, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Once upon a time...

    In that universe there was a place called Thïrœta.
    Post by: Bremen, Oct 26, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Picking up the Pieces - FEEDBACK

    Okay. This is my fourth bump. PLEASE READ AND COMMENTS ON MY STORY. All feedback is welcome, i'd just like someone to read it.
    Post by: Bremen, Oct 22, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    The Writer's Academy

    People should post feedback on my story in FF.
    Post by: Bremen, Oct 21, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    The Writer's Academy

    Grade me!
    Post by: Bremen, Oct 20, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    World War IV feedback

    Nice start. I think you need to expand more, and describe characters more. What are like? Appearance? Yada yada like that. And use more chat.
    Post by: Bremen, Oct 19, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Greeds Thorned Vines Sign up

    I appologize. I can't spell tonight. Name: Kay Pascäl Age: 21 Appearance: Kay is about 5'10, and has blonde hair. He has brown eyes, and is...
    Post by: Bremen, Oct 19, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    The Writer's Academy

    I felt the pulse of their drums. Thunk... Thunk... Thunk... It sickened me, they had our men's heads used for the drums. The arrows soared over...
    Post by: Bremen, Oct 19, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Picking up the Pieces - FEEDBACK

    Post by: Bremen, Oct 18, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Good and Evil united

    Good
    Post by: Bremen, Oct 18, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    The Writer's Academy

    I want to enroll
    Post by: Bremen, Oct 18, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Picking Up The Pieces

    Part three "Welcome to the slums." I glance around, and stare in horror. The buildings are falling apart, only a few windows have light, with a...
    Post by: Bremen, Oct 18, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Any ideas for a new story

    I think you should call them sections not chapters and EXPAND.
    Post by: Bremen, Oct 13, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    The Writer's Café

    Why is the rum always gone...
    Post by: Bremen, Oct 9, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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    Picking up the Pieces - FEEDBACK

    Please comment for the emoji with hair. ི
    Post by: Bremen, Oct 9, 2011 in forum: Fan Fiction
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