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Chapter 3 "Cassie, get up!" My mom called up the stairs. I ignored her. "Cassie!" I refused to answer her. "Will you get UP?" Uh. I...
@d_bo You're not an ombudsman. You're just some kid who likes to make everyone a bit depressed because you just 'hate' everything they write;...
Ahh okay sorry. I assumed when it said 2.0 that it was a second edition or something (:
Um sorry. This isn't that good. I just skipped most of it. Anyone who doesn't use paragraphs, I just give up. And also, try to build up the...
d_bo; just because you can't write and others can? I thought this was good, just ignore the haters (:
Cheese and Ironhulk; Are you two talking about pokemon?
I swear you just posted the exact same thing? Just saying :)
This is good. I really hate it when people do this And HI CHEESE -Swag x
Chapter 2 "Cassie! Over here!" The girl I was presuming to be Sarah shouted, and I wandered over. "Hey," I greeted, feeling a little more...
Oh by the way, lifes busy at the moment (studying, boyfriends) so the next chapter will probably be up tomorrow or Saturday night! -Swag x
OMG I LOVE THE FILM MEAN GIRLS :D Nah I'll admit it. I have got the inspiration from Mean Girls, I was hoping nobody was going to notice :p But...
I just like watching this whole conversation unfold...=D Sorry, but them tips are not true. I tell my boyfriend EVERYTHING, and we've been dating...
I do take him seriously :)
Aww thanks :)
Okay haha, I'm new to writing to be honest, I'm sorry if I didnt know these rules? Thanks cheese for actually explaining it nicely :D
Hope you liked it guys, feedback here pleasee :')
Hey guys, this is my new story, use the feedback thread pleasee :) Prologue "Ha ha! You lose, loser!" My brother shouted at me. "That was...
Just thought I'd write a couple of short stories and see what people say… Story one. "I told you. Go AWAY." Alison slammed her mobile down on...
GUYS, IM BACK :D
It was okay, but a couple of things; 1. Use paragraphs, it makes it so much easier for the reader to understand. People tend to skip whole blocks...