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Chapter 6 For once in my life, things became kind of awkward between my brother and I. Ever since I had told him about Saxon, he seemed withdrawn...
THANK YOU cheese :') Someone knows what they're talking about, at least :/
Actually, you did. You said something along the lines of, 'Im Adena, and I'm 17. I plan to survive the holocaust.' I see someone doesn't know...
*cough* stuck…up *cough* bi-ch *cough*
Oh…it's the same person
Sorry BrookeParis, that comment wasn't to you :') And okay, thanks :D -Swag z
A lot of things AND people fail. But only the talented succeed. By yours truly, just thought Id make that up…as you do
You may be 'pointing it out'. Even so, I think I would know how I want to structure my story. You don't need to point that out to me: I'm fully...
Hm, let's see what flaws I can find in your story, and pull it apart; just like you did to mine. There are several grammar errors. Only use '?'...
@celeste So? Does it really matter? To be honest, I don't really see how you have the right to pick my story to pieces. Every single little flaw...
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Chapter 5 I waited until the clock stroke midnight. Tonight was my night to patrol, alongside Dylan and Jake - two other members of the pack....
Thanks for that positive comment celeste… Thanks everyone else :')
Chapter 4 'I need to speak to you.' I received a text from Brianna. We shortly met at the front of the school. "What's up? "You have to...
When Renee mentioned that d_bo said 'women are only good for making sandwiches.' I'm sure he only meant that as a light-hearted joke. No need to...
Sorry guys but I just laugh when I see all you's fighting -Swag x
Well done, at least some people see sense ;) the threads that are dedicated to breaking him down just egg him on. -Swag x
Lol, thanks guys -Swag x
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