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D_bo is an idiot... I wouldn't mind his comments if they were constructive but telling people "you suck at writing why don't you just crawl in a...
Thank you
I would love some feedback for my story and don't worry about being harsh but please say why you think what you think. Also don't expect much from...
Sorry but I have deleted this story.
It's detailed and realistic.
I like.
Make it louder!
No.
This is really dramatic! I can't wait for the next part. And maybe just blank assassin? He's just a sexist bastard.
What does it matter that she's a girl writing a rather than a boy? And whats "hilarious" about it? This is a great story and you don't have a life.
Ask again but not on fan fic or people will get mad at you.
*kicks assassin* go away!
I actually really like this story and not everyone can write perfectly and even if they can't the story can still be really good. Keep writing...
I would recommend that you do at least 4 resets because that is an extra 200 ally spots and gives you a huge advantage when you are HLBC.
Nice story but please don't put anymore fainting in it.
This is a really good story; I hope you keep it going. It's very dramatic and I can't wait to read on. Also are you a twin?
I like the way all the drama was in the first chapter because not many stories talk about after all the drama but it was a bit full on.
Just as a quick heads up d_bo_assassin gets a kick out of saying people are rubbish so don't take it personally. I think it's an interesting poem...
Awesome
I don't think it's meant to be realistic and anyway who knows if it's a true story? I'm sure no one knows everything about the secret services.