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Thank you, Cheese. Apology accepted. I have begun rewriting. After looking back through what I've already posted, it was obvious to me that I've...
Zaln, I may rewrite some of the story, taking your suggestions into consideration. Thanks again. :-)
@Cheesemuffin: Your criticism is welcome, but please put it here rather than in the story thread. Thanks.
Thank you for your input, Zaln. You're right, this particular story is a somewhat toned-down account of my clan's recent achievements. Future...
(continue) Another dawn, and the Angels of Wars were ready to go. They started out by looking into the Origins of the trolls they had been...
Please post your comments here. This is my first foray into Fan Fics, and I'd appreciate your feedback. Thanks!
(continue) As the sun rose on the western lands, the angels charged into the Battle Royale. All day long the battle raged, but in the end, the...
(continue) Another early morning, and the troupe of angels was refreshed and ready to continue. Though they were leaving their best known area,...
Correction: in the last paragraph, the second "several" should be "some."
(continuing) The angels rose early the next morning, eager to set off once again on their great adventure. They were confident. After all, they...
(Please note, the use of the names of the ebs and eb bosses is not intended as plagiarism, but rather as indication of ebs completed. Thank you.)
This is a fictionalized account of my clan's play-through of the epic battles. "Amidst the ashes of wars, angels are born. Feared by all, loved...