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I am sorry but I will not bring that demented thing back into my life if I can help it, reg if you want the monkey back go find yourself
"I'm really sorry about this, the monkey and I have a strange and altogether troubled history"
Keir strides towards the monkey without a moments hesitation. He grabs him by the scruff of the neck and drop kicks the monkey out of the nearest...
Slowly he remembered what had happened, and as he did an all too familiar face appeared. "monkey?!!"
Why is there a hole in the roof he asks blithely?
Keir wakes up at a more normal pace this time slowly realising that he is not where he should be. Wondering at what this strange place was he...
The monkey waves dismissively to reg and says to keir " I didn't press the wrong button just not the one you expected me to press
Out I am odd. In
A monkey slowly saunters into the cafe looking pleased with himself. And laughs quietly at the man lying on the floor
Out- Not quite In-
He then proceeded to fall right back into unconsciousness
Keir jumps bolt upright and the strangest words popped out of his mouth. " that bloody monkey pressed the wrong button!!!"
Keir slams through the roof of the cafe crashing into the floor. After a couple of minutes he crawls out of the crater, slowly he stumbles towards...
Woop
Same here. Woo hoo!! I'm in the story great entrance for my character stora.
In the actual story
I'll help if you want. I'm good with ideas but not at actually making them sound good
Great story. But what about innocence? I wanna know what happens!!!
Hope the monkey gets the ninjas before the ninjas get you.
And then a homicidal monkey with a pick axe walked in and got to work