Separate names with a comma.
I think a more creative name would have been better, but the summary looks pretty interesting.
This story looks really good so far. :3
Name: Rika Age: 17 Side: Pro-war Gender: Female Personality: Feisty, is a bit of a flirt, and uses her body and feminine charm o get what she...
I'd like it better if it was easier to read. You know, spaces, capitalization, paragraph structure?
Anyone get sick from UP's nasty popcorn yet?
Oohhh low blood pressure! Quick come to the infirmary!
No I'm the nursey now. I can cure more than colds, though.
Perhaps. You decide, Gloomi. -evil grin-
Ooooohhhhh can I have a cookie sammich? :3
Again. That's too bad. ;n; Perhaps I should change professions to nurse? -pulls out needle-
Eheheh... Not the kind of "cleaning" I'm allowed to mention on this site.
Baw well that's too bad. ;n;
That isn't the kind of cleaning I do.
Does anything need cleaning?
So if nothing needs to be cleaned, the fetish maid is going to bed.
Yes they are. >:c
People are more comfortable though, UP.
Haha sorry kiki. My friend got homecoming and we were playing that today. I've got silent hill on the brain. And Pyramidhead? -drools-
And how AM I scary, by the way?
@jay Be glad I'm like not like the nurses from Silent Hill.