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THE RULES AND QUIRKS OF VAMPIRISM Written and Published by Chester B. Fields, Eighth Year Wizard at the Migin Magical Academy. I. The Vampire...
You have a lot of run on sentences. Each thought should be one sentence. For example: I hated everything about him. Like the way he walked and...
The second part of the prologue has been posted! :3 I would love to know what you all think! :D
(Bdddrrrrrp!) Bon Qui Qui's HP was restored! What would you like Bon Qui Qui to do?
Prologue, Part Two Kakarias barged into his dorm room, slamming the door behind him. After breathing heavily, the young wizard climbed into the...
Al...allioss... ;_; It's super effective! (Beep, beep, beep, beep) Alli...oss... ("My health is low, Master Bremen!")
It seems like an interesting concept, but I feel like I don't really have enough to comment on yet. I look forward to the next installment!
Allioss alli. Oss, alli! (Cheesus, that's a lot of notes, Dave. And thank you, Master Bremen! I believe we're waiting on Charizard to make his...
Thanks, guys! :D I am very glad that you like it :D
Alliossoss alli ossalli alli! ("Hey everyone! I would really appreciate it if you read and gave feedback on "It's A Long Story: Revamped"! I'll...
Please post all feedback for "It's A Long Story: Revamped" here. Thank you, and I hope you enjoy it!
Please refrain from posting here, but rather on the feedback thread. Thank you. Normally a story such as this would begin with the introduction...
I am from '10. Good to see you're back, though!
I really enjoyed reading it and can't wait for the next installment! It's so cool that you're back!! :D
Alliossalliliossossalli? ("I didn't know he voiced other people! Anyone I might know? Oh yeah, and I was playing Dragon's Dogma, and noticed that...
Alliossalli, Lioss Al Oss. ("Hikaru is the jerk, and Kaoru is nice. Did you know that the Japanese voice actors of Hikaru and Haruhi are married?")
Alliossalli ossossalli. ("I can tell them apart from their voices :D")
Bon Qui Qui used FANGIRL! (What happens: I run up to Charizard and ask him who his favorite host is. He answers Mori when the clear answer is the...
Alliossalli, Allioss. Lio, ss alli alliossss. Alli. ("I was simply unsure of which Pokemon Master Bremen was referring to. After all, you...
SPAZZ ATTACK FANGIRL BAD DANCING HIDE IN CORNER What would you like Bon Qui Qui to do?