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Hahah, you're welcome :)
I have run out of words to describe this story, so that means... I HAVE TO MAKE UP MY OWN WORDS! OMGWTFBBQSAUCE; this is amazing as usual :D
I agree with Beria! You are a master at describing, especially emotions. Awesome job! :D
^ Agreed :) Great chapter, as usual :D
Your descriptive ability is amazing. Keep it up with the awesome chapters!
Lovely chapter :) The story is fascinating and I like your writing style. It really pulls the reader in. Keep it up :D
I will give you a digital cookie if you do it :)
Oooh, I like it :) You described the atmosphere very well and Yana's emotions too. I wonder if Crystal and A(don't remember) will break her out......
Yes, on Wattpad you can comment, vote, get fans and such :) AND you can have super awesome book covers and there's forums... It's just all-around...
No one is on FanFiction anymore, really. My cousin posted a story on there and got ZERO feedback and barely and reads. All the top read stories...
I really like it. You really describe her emotions without saying "He was angry" or such. The text flows nicely and I found myself instantly...
Yay, thanks or making me the main character :D
Too. Much. AWESOMENESS! Keep it up ;)
Yaaaaaay :)
Name: Lydia Cromwell Gender: Female Age: 17 Appearance: Lydia has long, curly bluish-black hair. Her eyes are the color of the twilight sky....
OMG I love you :D The chapter was awesome and I'm so happy right now :)
Okay, awesomesauce :)
What did you think of my MChar (main character)? :P
Name: Yana Feynan Age: 23 Gender: Female Height: 5"9 Appearance: Long, curly hair the color of fire. Her eyes are a beautiful jade-color. She...
Teacher? Hahah, no. Our teacher wanted us to get feedback from other students, for a change :P