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Agent we had to make some financial cutbacks and your character didn't make the cut
U can delete ur own thread
Just hit delete
Cut*
Maybe they both got cuz in half?
If it was the end you would know
I notice a few mistakes but comp isn't working. Can't fix em. Sorry guys
Chapter 10 up
CHAPTER TEN "WHAT?!" Codemaster screamed. "The boy is gone," the man repeated. "I heard you the first time, dip shít. Now go find him!!" Just...
Thx and I will
That's why I liked ur character description crim. It gave me a good way to start a fight. Spoiled rich kid. Good insults
Amber isn't that big of character. If I put in her view it would be same as Riann's lol
That happened to me too. I wrote a huge long chapter then posted and it just brought me back to beginning of forum without posting it
I guess that chapter was the same as chapter 8 just from Riann's view
I made a mistake on it but can't get on comp to fix it
Chapter 9 up.
CHAPTER NINE "Codemaster, sir, we have a problem," said one of his henchmen, "The boy, Alex, is here." Riann's head snapped up. Alex!! He had...
It's a story on KaW. Didn't wanna make it long and boring.
Whatchya think crim? U main character so I would like ur feedback
Good. Just read it through. Many spelling errors. Go on comp and u can fix em