Separate names with a comma.
Irin does a classic facepalm then tries to help cheese out of the well. Upon the second failed attempt she decided to just leave him there. "At...
Chapter 15: Lock Box 8:03 PM Rain fell, cutting through the dark air, hitting the ground in a soft pitter-patter. The grappling-hook twirled...
I promised to bump this. Gosh, I've gotta get this rewritten. Going to add some stuff too. There will be some major plot changes, so stay tuned...
Okay guys, we ought to get fan fiction back on it's feet. It's gonna be difficult without all of the originals but I know we can do it! Writer's...
Wow, thanks. I really appreciate the review. Yeah, spelling was absolutely never one of my strong points. I wrote this back when I was writing...
Ah, well that's good. :)
So the essay's got you down?
CHEESE! Great to see you! ugh, seriously, people are plagiarizing? On kaw? For what, to impress people. Gosh. I haven't read that one, but I...
Law against stupidity, lol I was funny in december...a bit harsh too. Sorry! BUMP! Dude, I missed you guys!
((thank goodness for search ability, otherwise I never would have found this. I reminder that all feedback goes on the feedback thread, which I...
It's been way too long. How are you guys? Sorry for the disappearence. If anyone cares, I do have some good news. -The school musical is over,...
THANK THE DEAR SWEET LORD! IT'S OVER! And by 'it' I mean auditions. I can now get that song out of my head and continue rocking out to my country...
Stora! How did we miss each other again? DX I'm in Jersey. Jersey is...really weird actually. Like, theres a farm behind my house, but on a good...
Darn it! I missed it. Sorry guys. Anyone up for an extension? Soft music is heard suddenly as Irin walked through the double doors leading to...
Thanks Iron! Well, it seems I'm alone tonight. Cheers to whoever maybe out there, and a Very Happy New Year to all.
Preview of Innocence, Chapter 15, because I just started writing it and I kinda like the way this sounds. Rain fell, cutting through the dark...
Alright, here are the guidlines: You can use a character from any published book. However, if it is not a well known book/character, you may want...
You also used the phrase 'time of year' a lot.
Can anyone do it now?
Alright, I know what the problem is, and it hit me in this paragraph. First sentance, you use the words contemplated and complimentary. Both...