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Bastion, are you still looking for editors? I'm good w/grammatical corrections but want to understand requirements before I commit.
Looking good dc! Very captivating intro...I'd go see the movie!
You've got me waiting in anticipation to know what's gonna happen next!! Are the 22 missing ppl the ones in the cage?? Hurry & write more!!
So far, I'm curious to see where you're going w/the story. Your imagination intrigues me.
Omg dc, I'm truly impressed with your ability to write so eloquently. Your story was intreging, funny, & tragic. Otherthan a few minor grammatical...