Separate names with a comma.
And, it's supposed to be "more smoothly" not "move smoothly"
He decided to commit suicide
Hold on... The killer is a male... And you say he's a character from ki... But if its not tris or Chris... This is getting confusing.
I misspelled hid twice, and spelled shirt as short. Damn you autocorrect.
I just realized how many errors I made in grammar and spelling.
Chapter 8 I reached the gun first. I took it and pointed it at the man. I shot once and missed. The man grabbed my hand, and tried to take the...
/lock
Wait nvm I know who tris is
Wait wait wait, will the killer be colts sister?
Who's tris again? I just forgot :P
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A man watched spongebob,
I hope your being sarcastic
Great idea
Sorry for the wait. Note: this is still Justin's POV Chapter 7 "Hey! What the hell is wrong with you?!" I yelled to the man. He didn't...
Sorry for the wait. Couldn't get an Internet connection
Hey guys! To prevent the story thread from getting too crowded, I decided to make a feedback thread! So...yeah.
Note: This is Montgomery's POV again. Chapter 6 "Why does my alarm clock have to be so loud?!" I asked myself. I checked the calander. April...
um...uh...wait what?