Separate names with a comma.
Yes yes it is. It's someone you wouldn't expect. But don't worry, it'll all be made clear soon enough.
I'd be willing to help you, if you want.
This allows for the main thread to be kept clean and smoother to read. I didn't do this for my first story, and I didn't like the look of it. It...
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Prologue The school was dark, only illuminated by the street lights. The farther you ventured, the harder it was to see. Shadows danced along...
Alright. Few things before the story starts. 1) Please, please do not post here. I know I let that go last time, but I'm going to try and crack...
Tris will return, and Chris goes to him for help on a few occasion.
And you always have to say your name... That always annoyed me so much...
If was to post the prologue to KR, say tomorrow, would you guys like that? Also, neither Chris nor Tris will be the new killer. Sorry to...
Get out of FF OP.
Get out. Wrong section.
Is that sarcasm Jester? :P True, we've had many new stories recently...
What the hell
Actually, the dodgeball scene is well done in my opinion. I like it.
Fair point Warry.
Be gentle Warry. OP did say first story. It's a good start. Add a bit more description, fill it out a bit more and add some background. Lengthen...
It's a strong start, and has plenty of potential depending on how you take it. I'm confident you'll do a good job but as fair warning, and from...
Next week probably. I'm going to give myself a little cool down time, and watch to see how people like Killer Inside, any ideas people have, edits...
Planned? All of it. Actually written? First 15 chapters.
It's a very good start. I look forward to seeing more.