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Look Superman, just because it has "Story" in the title doesn't mean it belongs here. If it's a bad thread, he can just delete it, not move it...
So, what are the theories so far? Who do you think the killer is? Place your bets! Btw Smighter, I like your idea of it all being fake....
I like it Warry. Keep it up. It flows well, clever title, good description. It's all good! Couple grammar things but you know. It's still good.
Agree with the above. But it's a good story line! Even out a few grammar things here and there, and it would be even better. Keep writing!
Feedback here guys! Thanks.
Prologue My clammy, sweating hands readjusted themselves once again around the knives on my belt. The night air was thick and humid, and I...
Same as before guys. You know the routine. 1. Do NOT post here. Feedback thread. That's what it's for. Keep this thread clean please. 2....
Elmo, you're crazy lol
Chapter Four Hours ticked by as I rifled through old psychology books research MPD. A constant buzz of my ringtone echoed through my empty office...
Clarification: Shawn Helm is the younger adopted brother of Jade Helm, KC's first victim. He is suffering from MPD, multiple personality...
Chapter Three Taking deep breaths, I slowly stood and walked to my desk. His eyes sharply tracked me all the way there. Carefully, I opened a...
Lol we can all be more active, right? So, anyone planning anymore stories or poems or anything?
Welcome back Smighter
Chapter Two Frustrated after the meeting with Grim, I stormed into my office. The client was already there. I tried to quietly close the door and...
This feedback thread is much longer than the story, lol. Anyways, Chapter's up. Btw, nice story there Very creative. I'll have to keep that I...
Chapter One My alarm blared in my ear, silenced by the lazy whack of my hand. I squinted my eyes open, the morning calling to me outside my...
What do you mean by "This"?
Plane.... So creative, you should really put that to use. No, it's a broken ankle. Chapter up tomorrow hopefully. :)
Sorry guys, it might be a while before Chapter 1. I've had some irl problems from broken bones to family issues. It should be up in a few days...
Ender's Game is a story about a boy in the future who goes to a place called Battle School (at age 6) to learn to be a soldier. It's about the...