Separate names with a comma.
Hmm... Firstly, maybe this won't correspond with your plan for the story, but I think the title would sound better as 'Out For Blood Or In For...
Thanks for your feedback. If you wouldn't mind, I'd love for you to point out the grammatical mistakes. By that, I don't mean every single one...
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Chapter 10 Blakes P.O.V. "What the f*** was that?" I asked Nick. "Seriously man, she just came in here and started to play around with me....
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Chapter 8 Lailahs P.O.V. Wow. That had been something. I stood there daydreaming for while, until Blake brought me back from the Land of the...
I agree with doctor hulk. Use commas, semi colons, colons, etc… When somebody has finished what they are saying, you need to put one of these...
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Chapter 7 I woke up the next morning, with stomach cramps. No effin way. We didn't do the dirty last night, right? I ran through my memories,...
Chapter 6 Finally, all my lessons are over! But the weird thing is that, all of the teachers acted the same around me as Mrs. Stretch had when...
Chapter 5. "Lailah? Lailah? Wake up!" I jolted awake to the sound of my voice being called. Being called by Blake. "What…what happened?" I...
Chapter 4 Blakes P.O.V Damn, that girl is hot. She's gonna be a prize. A prize for one of the guys. Someone to show off. Suddenly, a low...
Chapter 3 On the way, Blake and I talked about lots of different things, ranging from family to sports. He seemed like a really nice guy...except...
Chapter 2 The car journey was awkward, to say the least. All we did was listen to my dads 80's songs. After about 3 hours, we finally pulled...
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Ok I get what you're saying, yeah that does make sense! I guess because I'm not a twin, I wouldn't think like one.