Separate names with a comma.
Oh good, your grammar should be better now!
Well I'm honestly not much older than you, and everyone praises my work. I'm just in the top english class at my school. Maybe take some time out...
Yeah I know michelle haha. That's no coincidence lol.
Spacing isn't lots of little dots… You need paragraphs. New speaker, new line. Also, lookie here: "When a person has finished speaking, you...
Okay. Well all of that aside, I do quite like the story.
Aww thank you :)
Yeah um...KIND OF hoping that you guys wouldn't notice :0
Nah I'm joking, he's probably alright really. He's just slagging me off to everyone.
I'm not the only one who doesn't like Vas? Ohh :D WE'RE ALL IN THIS TOGETHER!
Professional, without a name? So you're saying that my stories don't look professional? Ohh okay then.
Ahem *clears throat*. Vas. 'that swagger guy' is a girl. Quit your moaning. Everyone writes 'don't post your feedback here.' Everyone gets...
I must apologise But just chill out, seriously. I write 'please use the feedback thread, don't post here' and go on to explain why on my...
Chapter up.
Just ignore the chapter numbers please, this whole story has been written already so I can't go through and change it. So nobody say that I've...
Re: (dont have a story name yet) WHY POST A STORY HERE WHEN YOU DON'T HAVE A NAME FOR IT? WHY?
Thank you :D I know a lot of you may not be keen on the romantic aspects but I'm a girl, so I wouldn't really like to write just a fight-y,...
NEW CHAPTER UP
Chapter 15 Lailahs P.O.V. What do I do? I'd love to say yes, Nick is a great guy, and I have a HUGE crush on him. But, I can't stop...
I am the opposite of your fan. I am your worst nightmare.
HAHAHA. Oh man, I do love our completely thoughtful and overly generous readers here in fan fiction.