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All Hail
Support to my awesome Family. Also, Ahdy needs unicorn rp on his wall
Lets be fair... His defiance lasted about 30 seconds. Lets give him credit for trying
Consean youre a damn fool. That is the original ahdragos. And id give up before you get farther behind if i was you.
Support.
Gunna lose 11 of em. Smh
Ty for the advice
Thank you for your input. This was a 30m-1hr worth of work done while in the car off the top of my head. Just seeing if people thought it deserved...
Thank you
Yes i have done poetry as well. However, its not all that great
Lags and crashes a loy
Thank you for your feedback this is just a rough draft from about an hours worth of writing. Ill consider your input in my revisions
Thanks Would you like to see a part two?
Well, a body was never found, and a single dogtag was left behind. He just may be alive
️ Ty my lil nooblet️ always love hearing from you. Anything you found particularly good that i can capitalize more on?
Thank you Det appreciate the feedback. Anything youd like to see more of if i make a sequel?
stay on topic please. Im looking for actual feedback on my writing
Perhaps Doctor Suess is more your reading level then?
So you wouldnt read because of the length?
just looking for feedback on my writing. Should there be a part two? What would you like to see in it? Did you like this story?