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That isn't the real spragga, once everyone made a big deal he probly changed his name. he probly got annoyed by everybody making a big deal
Am I stupid because I trolled him?
Nah I'm just Asian
I checked him out; I posted on his wall a few times about 2 days ago... I wasn't attacked
I like it also. The Paleskins remind me of the Empire's soldiers in Eragon and the Inheritance Series, which didn't feel pain because of a spell,...
Chapter 5 is very interesting - it reminds me of the Eragon series. Good job!
I like the way you're developing the plot.
Very good story so far, can't wait for the next chapter.