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Good start, very descriptive. However, make sure your adjectives stay with a focus. At a point, you said "his pointy ears were aware of...
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Chapter 6 "He did not!" Catylin laughed at my story, sitting across the fire. James sat next to me with his arm around my shoulder. "Yup....
No one's just alright in this place.
The party just started though, right?
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Chapter 5 The Fourth Day The day started with a few battles with the occasional skirmisher. James hadn't talked to me since I explained what...
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