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Well d bo if u will give me some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism then I'll b happy to take it, and no thanks to u I am getting better at my writing and...
Sorry I posted on ur story!!!!-it's was really good, the dramatic stuff came a little too soon, otherwise the intro was cool!
Really good story!!! The dramatic stuff came a little too soon, but good intro!!!
@cheesemuffin-in the afternoon u hav lunch and stuff and most people hav sandwiches 4 lunch lol
Wow gr8 story it's awesum!!!I hope u continue!!!
Ty joey!!!
*he admired the SHINNING river
*-I didn't smile back
I met afternoon. I saw him dancing with his orange silky cloak. I caught his smile and snowy white teeth. His soft yellow shirt and his vibrant...
That's a cool story! I hope u write more!!! Maybe u should introduce sum bullies into the story or sumthing???
OMG WRITE SOME FRIKKEN MORE!!! I LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (oh and people who don't like it-why do u read it!!!!????)
Omg I LOVE the story plz PLZ continue ur doing a G8 job!!!