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Chapter 15 What? he asked me hmmm I replied "why are you so sad " do you want me to tell you honestly I asked him
Chapter 14 And then it struck me .. my entire destiny flashed before my eyes. And then I was back in my body I shot out of the water as fast as I...
Well then don't look at my story Mr I have horrable grammer
Ok ill leave u in suspense for a while before posting the next part (: also tell me if you want me to do the secuel. "The forgotten star of aeraeol "
Finally we stopped walking. Now what, I said well do you're thing, he replied what thing! I said getting impatient you're ultimate power thiny,...
Chapter 13 Ok lets go jack said, go where, to the stars of aeraeol Oh, I said well lets get going, asset walked on I wondered what he meant by...
Hey guys continue or not idk if you like it
Oh guys thank my brother I just learner the use of commas.
Chapter 13 As I regained consciousness I realized I was wearing a light green dress and silver slippers as I looked around jack said oh...
Chapter 12 As I finally came concious again I saw that jack was looking at me. Hello I managed to say hi he said as he hoses me off how did you...
Today I woke up to my bars being knocked down and I recognized rebel soldiers Hello they said and I managed a heartfelt sob as the put me into a...
Chapter 12 Its been four years my arms and kegs have been stuck to my body ive been buried alive countless times and Im less then alive I'm only...
Chapter 11 After a whole year the king came ti see me I was covered in filth blood and half way unconscious hello the king said I managed to give...
Chapter 10 I woke up to a horrible feeling no clothes and a odd sensation. I realized I was back in my same cell but modifactations had been...
Chapter 9 Wait jack called after me do you need any weapons? I made my sword and yelled no. When I reached the city I thought about how I would...
Sorrry meant to say continuation of chapter eight
Well thanks a lot I said giving him a grim smile as I went to my bedroom I slept surprisingly well counting the fact that I had never slept on...
Chapter 8 Good he replied we need as many troops as we can ... the king has e'en strengthening his army. Ok I said I am eager to fight a war!...
Well thanks a lot but I'm just a 7th grader and I'm horrable at English ...
Chapter 8 Embarresed I got out of the pool along with everybody else. Who are you somebody asked you just fell out of the sky are you a God?...