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me 3 :(
no, the dialogue is good.
no just a few typos, and there were barely any grammar mistakes during the part with the queen.
Chapter one-Deserter Sparks flew. A sharp metallic clang ran through the deserted area of town. Swords flying, slashing, thrusting. One opponent...
ok! thanx! :D
i am gonna update the story today if i have a chance!
i described the rotten air thanx!
LOL well its kinda hard to describe stuff when the character cant see but i am trying my best
there is nothing to say about this chapter its too good to be described by words
=O wow theres nothing else to say. just wow.
Bump so more people will read it! I will write more tomorrow if I have a chance! I've got a few good ideas and surprises planned ;) And I'll...
lol ya and when the main charecter finds out something u already knew, its not interesting! its more dramatic if u didnt know it, even if u...
lol thanx and ikr!? opposable thumbs rock! the point is its confusing most stories give u more info than the characters have, but in my story, u...
any suggestions? pls?
lol
ya somebody told me u quit GlooMi i was really suprised
I agree thats exactly what i am trying to say but i bad at showing people what i mean>.<
hi GlooMi! nice list! can u add my story to it?
there r a lot of useless threads and rps r creative y did the devs decide to move us off at? maybe if so many ppl hadnt complained nothing would...
just CHECK THE FF THREAD LIKE I DO how come i know when the stories r updated? JUST TRY HARDER and stop blaming us, cuz it was partially ur fault...