Operation:interception feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by german_idiot, Aug 29, 2010.

  1. Hmm sounds good who's the author
     
  2. Jonathan Safran Foer. :)

    North Korea... My family's from the South. Lol.
     
  3. So wait is this a war novel or a family trying to get to the south novel
     
  4. Hmm? No, I didn't mean that the novel was anything to do with Noeth/South Korea, sorry >_< I just meant the format of paragraphs. For example, when people talk, their quotations are jammed next to each other on one paragraph (like yours); I was using it as an example xD
     
  5. Hey the stories not lookin too bad bud ur doing keep up the good work I can't wait for more.
    BUMP
     
  6. When's the next chapter
     
  7. Chapters 5&6 are up
     
  8. When's the next chapter gonna be out
     
  9. 5&6 r up mayb 2morrow will b 7&8
     
  10. Good job! I'm too lazy to make a bio, but can you make a character with my name on her? Preferably evil 
     
  11. Well I guess I squeeze u in gloom just post ur person here but after that I'm not accepting any more applications
     
  12. Sounds good so far. Looks like a good plot. Keep it up.
     
  13. Chapters six and seven are up
     
  14. That was really good. U know a lot of military terms
     
  15. Dads been on two tours to Iraq and Afghanistan and to help teach cops in Turkey and Kuwait he tells me alot of stuff about military stuff
     
  16. When's the next chapter
     
  17. GG UR TOO IMPATIENT I DO HAV SCHOOL AND CRAP I HAV TO DEAL WITH HOPEFULLY FRIDAY THOUGH
     
  18. Ok the books awsome thought
     
  19. Can't wait for my char to pew ppl out o the sky