The Ultimate Price

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 25, 2010.

  1. The ultimate price

    The cold clutches of death
    Hold me, embrace me
    They make me remember
    My most terrible days
    The warm and sweet life
    Being sucked out of me
    Nothing left to say
    But so much more to do
    If given a warning
    I would have been careful
    But what's done, is done
    And I'm left to pay
    The ultimate price
    Today is my day.
     
  2. Post feedback below
     
  3. Wow
    I hope ur not expecting this of us in poetry wars :S
     
  4. Its kinda depressing
     
  5. No, if ur in the poetry wars you go up against someone ur lvl. And yes fang, it is sorta depressing, but I'm not in the best of moods so that's how my poems turn out.
     
  6. I hate poetry...
     
  7. Thats ok ranger, not everyone likes it!
     
  8. Um… nice poem! The meaning of it is kinda scary though…
     
  9. It's good....depressing, pessimistic....but still goo.
     
  10. I know, I was kinda sad. Now I'm trying to get myself in a mood to write poetry... I'm listening to depressing music, but I'm like, giddy!