The peaceful lands of Ardaina were the greatest producers of Fish and Gold ever to float the Sea's of Kaw, Joan grimaced as she remembered the shipwrecks they had passed on their way to Darin Port. Many a ship were lost to the sea, and pirates... including Joan's shipmates, were pirates. This is my first chapter in the "Rage" Series, don't comment much, maybe a post or 2, And I will post more chapters, also if you want too, post character ideas and I might include them in the story
The ship creaked again, and not for the first time Joan cursed. She knew the captain was completely neglecting the ship's repairs, he just used up their last "Liberation" of goods, Antonio her fellow orphan, swaggered over too her "Joan, you'll catch your death out here! Why are you on ship's duty?" "I don't trust the sea to let us live, hear that?" As she tapped on the creaking planks "That's the sound of this ship falling apart, and at first chance, I'm getting off this sinking ship" And Joan, left Antonio before he could say any more.
The SeaHawk wasn't much for speed or strength, but it could easily wreck havoc upon any warship, And Farris, saw another prize. 24 Guns, Fine Curved masts, and as far as Farris knew... a million gold worth of silver. "All Hands to deck!!" "Get The reserve Slugs to the Port side" He smiled, his cannons were the envy of any Naval vessel, capable of sinking a ship with 5 hits. But the strangest thing he saw, was that they were not running...
a lowly captain sputtered next to him "Sir, wweee cannot lose or damage our cargo, we would surely be punished horribly" "So what? These pirates are going to sink for raising the Jolly Roger infront of our ship, they will know fear" "FOWARD CANNONS!!! OPEN FIRE!!!" The volley of cannons shaked the crew of The SeaHawk, but they put up their own resistence to the attack "Sir, do you know what you just done... you have angered Ferris, the pirate king" So lads, your scared of a little cannon fire?!?
"You dare insult my title of pirate king!! Men go to starboard!!" Joan & Antonio grabbed their sniper rifles and started picking off the men at the helm, but they were soon pinned down. "Joan, pass me gunpowder, there are some rats at the toward cannons that need cleaning out" "Here Antonio, want a Ale? Ill be happy to get you a bib too" Antonio then watched in amazement as she picked off the helmsman and 6 unlucky souls that dared to peek at their attacker in quick succession
This happened. Then this happens. Then something else of equally dull caliber happens. "-statement-" said Generic Character. Not only do I see this format, it's riddled with spelling and grammatical errors.