Back before this had begun When we first met I tried to run And then each day you tried anew To make me see that special you Everyday I’d run away And you’d come back day after day Now over time your words came true I slowly saw that side of you And then you opened up some more But still I tried not to adore Bur once again you did persist And harder it got to resist And yet I held stubborn as can be A loving person just is not me But these words you didn’t believe And still my heart you worked to retrieve Then I saw you were too sweet to ignore And over time I wanted you more So here I stand craving affection My heard wide open to your inspection Shedding tears of joy as you lay claim Your love’s so special can you give me blame? And now I wonder is it really true, Do I really belong to you? To my soul you opened the door Now I am yours, forever more. And what more else is there to say? Forever by you I will stay. We are soul mates, you know it’s true My heart is yours, I belong to you.
I've mulled over both of these in my head while working, and jot them down as I get the chance. Which is good, because it keeps me going over and over the same lines until I can write them down, and I edit them slightly each time.
This breath This thought This longing This hunger This pain I go through I walk the path of rusty nails and broken glass All for you You have captured me I am completely yours Dear cigarette
Here what I find in poetry: girls generaly write poetry better, but normally fail at love poems guys are extremely successful with love poems Great poem, I loved it!
Once and again once but more and more Please let there always be Never the end no last line no final knowing let there always be more and deeper swifter longer fuller more More of you More for me