So, this is the page for feedback on 'Your Own Pokémon Adventure!' Please tell me what you think! -Steph
Interesting to write in "you"-form. I've only read one other story/book that used it (can't remember the name). That's not a bad thing, though. Once you get used to it, it really helps to get you into the story. So far, a good job. Keep up the good work
༄Wow, so Kanto region, I take it? I wrote a PKMN story in Hoenn a while back, but nonetheless, your story is great! Near-perfect grammar, beautiful layout, and the unique perspective are all awesome elements. Your story is very well written. Truthfully, this has a lot of potential. Please write more. This writing style is an uncommon one, and I've read few stories that do this. And I love it. Happy fans here ;D༄ iZaln
Thanks everyone! I'm glad you like it so far, I'm thinking of maybe putting it on Wattpad and see what my fans think.
Liked your new chapter, it was fun and lively I hope that you continue posting and keep up the AWESOME
༄Wattpad is a nice little system. Just a shame you can't update via their app. You need to long in thru safari༄ iZaln
I like Vulpix too, it looks cute but when it evolves to Ninetails I think it doesn't look so cute anymore.