(Hello. This is my first KaW story. ENJOY!) He said he loved me. I loved him. He kisses me. I loved it. He was perfect. It amazed me. Turns out, it was a lie... ----- I walked through the halls, my black hair hung over my face as I didn't make eye contact. "Emo!" someone yelled as they slammed my books on the ground. I ignored them and picked it up. I continued walking to Spanish. "Hola Emilia" the Spanish teacher said. "Hola." I muttered and sat down. The most popular guy, Jonn, sat next to me. "Why are you sitting next to me? You always ignore me." I said to him. "maybe I want a change." he said trying to make eye-contact. "Silencio Emilia y Jonn" the teacher said. I nodded and opened my notebook. The whole class Jonn kept trying to get my attention. After class he tried to catch up with me. "Just stop" I said. His eyes flashed hurt alittle. "Emily?" he said. "What!" I practically yelled. "Will you go out with me?"
post more at a time..But it's good so far. (u kinda ruined possible twist at the end by the title and prologue btw) And next story do something different, all these 1st person ones about college are not original /End rant :3
post more at a time..But it's good so far. (u kinda ruined possible twist at the end by the title and prologue btw) And next story do something different, all these 1st person ones about college are not original /End rant :3
I didn't do details. And one for all y'all know she cheats on him and I dramatically make Jonn the main pov.
Well, it's cliched, it's unoriginal, it's predictable, it's bland, it's not described well.... But it's not bad. My only advice is to not follow the clichés. Those are the bane of creativity. Insanity is the way to true creativity. I should know. I'm Cheesemuffin.
I was thinking of posting a horror story but then I was like, well what if I just be normal for a bit.
I looked at him in shock and I could barley form words. He leaned in and set his soft lips on mine. I pushed him away, my black hair flew over my shoulder. "No." I said stubbornly and walked away. My friend, Lily, was standing there. "What! YOU SAID NO!?!" she exclaimed. "Yup. He was denied." I replied acting like nothing happened. Truth is, something did happen. I felt something I never felt. When his sweet lips touched mine my stomach curled a bit. Could I possibly like him? I though. I couldnt, if I do I'll die. "How could you say no? He's the hottest, strongest, and quarterback!" she said. "Turn around then think why I said no." we turned and he was already making out with a slut. Serena goes out with everyone. She would do anything for sex and kisses. It made me sick. "She's just a stupid hoe. You know some people act like that because they need someone to love." lily said then nudged me. "Well he can love Serena. I, Emily Poscato, will Never go out with him. EEEVVVVEEEERRR" I said adding emphasis on the 'ever'. Lily shook her head then said "Sometimes I don't get you." then we got in my car and drove away. ---------- We arrived at my house and went to my room. "MOM! Lily is here! Can she sleepover?" I yelled. "Sure! Just be quiet after 1:00am!" my mom replied. "Yay!" lily cheered then grabbed my hand and nail polish. "I just love doing your nails" Lily said. I gave her a crazed look. "See I bite mine so they are short but yours are so long!!" Lily stated trying to explain herself. "Umm... Okay then." when she finished doing my nails we went downstairs, made popcorn then went back up to go on OnDemand. "What movie do you want to watch?" I asked. "Did you see 'Repo! The genetic opera'? I love that movie!" Lily chirped then grabbed the remote putting it on. During the whole movie we talked, laughed and even listen to the songs. "Is he on the phone with his daughter while taking out that dudes organs?" I asked. "Hell yeah!" lily said eating popcorn. "THAT SO COOL! That small intestine looks real. Oh god that heart is still beating!" I said. "SHUT UP! I'm trying to watch! I don't need you narrating" she said then punched my arm. I nodded and watched. GRAVEROBBER IS SO HOT! I wish he was the one that asked me out. We watched a lot movies and then around 4:00am we went to bed. I snuggled into my green sheets and got comfy. "Lily!!!" I said in a loud whisper. "What?!" I could tell by her tone she was tired and didn't feel like talking. "I'm thirsty!" I complained. "Go downstairs and get something then!" she yawned. "What if someone kills me?" pouted me. "Then rest in peace" she said then put the pillow under my head. "Hate you!" then I got up and walked out of my room.