World of War feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010.

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  1. Srry made a mistake on last 1 I need 10likes and chapter 1 is coming on
     
    #1 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010
  2. Hmm. I'm not a reader and dont like fan fiction but the title sounds cool  that's always a plus right?
     
    #2 ChristianHick, Aug 8, 2010
  3. So sounds like a like!
     
    #3 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010
  4. Yep. I read it now. Interesting.
     
    #4 ChristianHick, Aug 8, 2010
  5. Yay I have 1 like
     
    #5 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010
  6. 2 likes
     
    #6 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010
  7. Alright I will post chapter 1 in a day or so
     
    #7 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010
  8. Chapter 1 is up this is the only chapter of story telling the rest ofthe chapters have action in them
     
    #8 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010
  9. I'd like it better if it was easier to read. You know, spaces, capitalization, paragraph structure?
     
    #9 *RikaTsukikai (01), Aug 8, 2010
  10. Ok
     
    #10 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010
  11. Srry don't have editor ATM but I'll work on that
     
    #11 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010
  12. But is the plot good
     
    #12 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010
  13. *pops in* ooooh we left earth .... bad people there were ... hopefully you took the very crazy tigaz ...
     
    #13 Tigaz, Aug 8, 2010
  14. Lol i can try but u will have to wait for chapter 2
     
    #14 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010
  15. >@.@< you forgot the tigaz *iz dead on the planet ... becomes a ghost and haunts u* teehee
     
    #15 Tigaz, Aug 8, 2010
  16. Uhhhhhhhhhh how about u someone who I meet that is a good fighter
     
    #16 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010
  17. *hugz mas* just jokin with ya ... no worries!! *offers cookies*
     
    #17 Tigaz, Aug 8, 2010
  18. Mmmm delicious *takes cookies*
     
    #18 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010
  19. I'm soo glad no tickles
     
    #19 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010
  20. I'm at the end of the first part of the story if u read chapter 4 the end is open I want ur votes to kill the man or spare his life!!!3 votes needed to pass on with the story
     
    #20 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 9, 2010
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