Just an intro to the story, tell me wut u think. O and u can post here The wind raced through the forest and passed Relyks' face. His hands were shaking. The wind felt as if there was some kind of beast running circles around at a speed unknown to men. His vision was fading, his hands hands felt cold, and his head was dizzy. He tried to run away from this being, but there was no escaping it. Everything went black and he fell to the ground with a thud. A sound of a thousand voices surrounded him. Men screamed,"King, get news to the king!" Relyks opened his eyes and saw the Royal Guards of M'Rania. He tried to lift his arms, it didn't work. He attempted to move his legs, that didn't work either. The guard picked Relyks up and ran to the carraige and threw him on a seat. He looked up at a hooded man. The man took his hood off and looked at him. It was his father, King Enimrac of M'Rania. They brought Relyks to the palace and fed him. "Relyks, the king requests your presence," said a guard as he brought Relyks to the throne room. "Ah, my son. Welcome home. I have a gift for you." Relyks' eyes lit up as the king continued,"You see, as you just turned the age of eighteen, you are finally getting used to this world. You are now ready to wield your first blade." finished the king Relyks was overwhelmed. The guard presented the blade to him which had a guard of a wolf's head. His blade was gray and black. Relyks had decided what it shall be called, "I'll name it.... Wolf Sabre," Thats the first chapter, short and simple. Thanks for reading