Wolf Sabre/Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Marodo, Oct 31, 2010.

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  1. Hope u enjoy my new story . Any comments or thoughts go here and ill post when a new chapter is up, thanks for reading.
     
    #1 Marodo, Oct 31, 2010
  2. Nice so far. No hurt intended, but when he named the sword it reminded me of someone getting a puppy. 
     
    #2 *Kimber03 (01), Oct 31, 2010
  3. Haha, thts funny. Now tht i think of it, it does remind me of tht
     
    #3 Marodo, Oct 31, 2010
  4. Yeah, but other than that it's good. Getting right to the action.
     
    #4 *Kimber03 (01), Oct 31, 2010
  5. Yea next chapter will be longer but maybe a bit less exciting
     
    #5 Marodo, Oct 31, 2010
  6. Ya it's good, I'm a terrible writer
     
    #6 *kAILY1 (01), Oct 31, 2010
  7. Xplorer...y?
     
    #7 Marodo, Oct 31, 2010
  8. ALL MY ARE BELONG TO THIS
     
    #8 TheSilverPanda, Oct 31, 2010
  9. Oh xplorer marodos gonna get u
     
    #9 german_idiot, Oct 31, 2010
  10. Nice
     
    #10 Fangedwolf, Oct 31, 2010
  11. Oh well, didn't make it, I don't care( I can't believe I didn't make it!!) jk.
     
    #11 Fangedwolf, Oct 31, 2010
  12. U said he would be like 7 lol
     
    #12 TheSilverPanda, Oct 31, 2010
  13. Yea, i lied. I wanted to make more than one book, so then i realized i dont have to make him young
     
    #13 Marodo, Nov 1, 2010
  14. ROFL
     
    #14 TheSilverPanda, Nov 1, 2010
  15. Yea i had one of those "moments" 
     
    #15 Marodo, Nov 2, 2010
  16. Let me guess u had a brainfart
     
    #16 german_idiot, Nov 2, 2010
  17. Sure
     
    #17 Marodo, Nov 2, 2010
  18. Chap 2 is up
     
    #18 Marodo, Nov 2, 2010
  19. Nice! I hope the villain is exceptionally evil... MWAHAHAHA!
     
    #19 *lady-marian (01), Nov 2, 2010
  20. Awesome story  great writing...enthralling. And you used my character!!! 
     
    #20 Delphin, Nov 2, 2010
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