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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by LEGENDARY_LION, Sep 5, 2010.

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  1. Keep in mind it's not finished it's a piece in the making!!!
     
    #1 LEGENDARY_LION, Sep 5, 2010
  2. Dusty I like your story! It just sucks you in! If you can add charachters smoothly, and create interesting dialouge, it will turn out into a great story!
     
    #2 *lady-marian (01), Sep 5, 2010
  3. I know I have trouble creating new characters but I'm working on it
     
    #3 LEGENDARY_LION, Sep 5, 2010
  4. Bump
     
    #4 LEGENDARY_LION, Sep 5, 2010
  5. Read the story and if u want to be in it just post here!
     
    #5 LEGENDARY_LION, Sep 5, 2010
  6. No need to add me, I'm allready in it! Lol!
     
    #6 *lady-marian (01), Sep 5, 2010
  7. Chapter five complete!
     
    #7 LEGENDARY_LION, Sep 5, 2010
  8. It's great! Can't wait for more!
     
    #8 *lady-marian (01), Sep 5, 2010
  9. Chapter six complete!!
     
    #9 LEGENDARY_LION, Sep 5, 2010
  10. Bump
     
    #10 LEGENDARY_LION, Sep 5, 2010
  11. Bump
     
    #11 LEGENDARY_LION, Sep 5, 2010
  12. BUMP
    would bump the story but don't wanna ruin it
     
    #12 *HannahMarie55 (01), Sep 7, 2010
  13. 
     
    #13 *HannahMarie55 (01), Sep 9, 2010
  14. I already hav a book called wizard world!!!!! U COPIED!
     
    #14 *arimay (01), Sep 10, 2010
  15. Thanks Hannah and arimay you do?
     
    #15 LEGENDARY_LION, Nov 26, 2010
  16. I bumped it
     
    #16 LEGENDARY_LION, Nov 26, 2010
  17. Why does it say it was made by The_Lone_One?
     
    #17 LEGENDARY_LION, Nov 26, 2010
  18. I was wondering the same thing... Anyways I like the story so far. A little bit more detail would be nice though but I appreciate how to story goes straight to the action.
     
    #18 *Kimber03 (01), Nov 26, 2010
  19. I'm not the_Lone_One!!!
     
    #19 LEGENDARY_LION, Nov 26, 2010
  20. Ur name was the lone one? Didnt kno i thought it went from dusty straight to legendary lion
     
    #20 awesome_awesomer, Nov 26, 2010
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