Whispers

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by theriverssbend, Nov 26, 2010.

  1. PLEASE DON'T POST HERE. I WILL MAKE A FEEDBACKTHREAD OR WHATEVER

    I couldn't see the world, but I saw the goodness in him. I couldn't hear the world, but I heard his songs of joy. I couldn't live in the world, but I lived there with him. Who am I? Well, that's easy! I'm his spyrit guide, his conscience. Ask me my name, I tell you I am him. You would say you don't know him. I'd say of course you do!! Who is him?? Him is your spirit guide. If this doesn't make sense to you now, it will later on. Continue to read and I guarantee your life is at stake. Could you live without a conscience in a world of war. What if you were a leader in that war. Probably not. Triten Clorad did, and he went on a quest to find it, only to learn his conscience had become it's own person.


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  3. Ch.1

    "Attention!" Triten yelled, "Today, we execute plan 119. Baniine squad, to the archer towers! Lzaki squad, to the defense line. Omard squad, to the behind-attack treefortresses. Clorad squad, front and center today. The Dmorns attack at sundown. Please be ready. Are there any questions?" Baniine raised his sword.

    "Yes Baniine?"

    "Sir, preference of bow, sir?"

    "Tall, mad of oak and long range of attack!"

    "Thank you, sir!"

    "Anything else?" the room stayed silent "Dismissed!". The soldiersfiled out of the room.

    "For the freedom of the slave-children."