Whispers or the scythes

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Burningclaw, Sep 2, 2011.

  1. This will be in three perspectives; Aqua; Zero; and Lulu who"disappeared in a nuclear explosion" so far three chapters have been made:


    "Lulu! WAKE UP"called his younger sister Nanaly.
    "you need to stop calling me this I am Lelush Lamperush... Not 'lulu'"he replies kidishly. As he walks outside, forgetting something he sees a 'Shadow Scythe', a death machine made during the war against Britania. Britania won forcing us to be called 11's. He walked down the street still half asleep at 5am for school he notices a soft feeling at the back of his shirt. At first he ignored it but when everyone laughed when he arrived at home room he knew something was up but he couldn't put his finger on it.
    "I don't know or care what you are laughing about..." he replied coldly as he sat.
    "Lelush-" his best friend "Kogie" was interupted by his teacher.
    " LELUSH!!! I know you get tired but that is no reason to wear your pajamas to school. Then the nuclear bombs fell.

    That happened 7 years ago before I became zero...
    Hello my name is Lelush yes it happens I am the sad little 11 year old in this memory but that will never change why will happen from this point out...

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    A scythe flickers in the distance as Aqua runs to find her brother that was chased away by the nightmares.
    "I must get him back to the black nights..."
    she says with a grimace remember in the bloody claws and mouthed of the nightmares that attacked them and took Terra.
    Thats when it all changed... Then she saw them, the nightmares... No not the nightmares, the cursed demon it was only a kid!
    "Hello! ARE YOU OK!?"
    she shouted as she ran up with her dirks in her hands.
    "yes..."
    he responded as he held aqua's brother's scythe to her throat.
    "who are you!!!"she screamed in fear.

    "I am Patrick...you are?"

    "aqua..."she says with a dark tone in her voice.

    "we better help Zero..."she says

    "why help them... Nanaly's ship is bugged..."

    "How...who?"she said stupefied.
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    The war started with out knowing it. The war of Nightmares and the Black Knights. There he was... Colin, Deputy of the Black Nights lead by me... I go by Zero...

    I saw them fly by... The nightmares with their devil eyes and hollow hearts... Colin ran up to the first his grey hair following him when the blood splattered on my life. It was all grey from there.
    "WE ARE TOO LATE ZERO"Colin yelled
    "NANALY!!!!"her ship crashed into the nightmare cavern killing her, Colin and me... Or so I thought... I woke up in darkness with blood on me.
    "Nanaly..."I asked coldly in the science. Then he came with his scythe over my mask
    "NAME!"he yelled, but I couldn't speak...
    He helped me up...
    "Pat-"I started but corrected myself:
    "Zero..."
    "hello I'm Jake..." the stranger responded to my unasked question.
    "How-"I started again
    "Don't ask"he said coldly with his yellow eye
    He lead me out and he helped me get to the black nights.
    "you know need a new deputy for my clan..." I asked with a hollow singe of regret.