Whirlwind

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by XxThunder_BirdxX, Apr 14, 2012.

  1. Whisking away boats,
    Destroying strong brick walls,
    Knocking down castle towers,
    Tearing apart shopping malls.

    The whirlwind is coming,
    Very, very fast!
    Get cover quickly
    Before it's past!

    Get in your sheds,
    Bring food supplies,
    Protect yourself from the wind
    That's raging outside!

    When will it stop?,
    I ask thee Sky,
    Sky says:
    Look out, you're going to die!
     
  2. Hope you like the poem it's my greatest effort!
     
  3. Please praise me, say how I could improve it or make me go XD!
     
  4. Someone please post on here...
     
  5. nobody is posting because the vast majority of poetry is sucky. a form of artistic expression outdated belonging to another era.

    and as usual, this poem sucks assholes. find a new hobby
     
  6. Whatever trollers say, I don't care...
     
  7. Troll me all you want, I still don't care XD
     
  8. how is telling you the truth trolling? it did suck.

    bad.
     
  9. ♪Lalalaa i dont care wat u say lalalalala ♪
     
  10. lalalalala you're retarded lalalalala