Ok I am thinking of posting one of my stories in fanfic but don't know which one. I can only write one at a time. Please tell me honestly if you would bother reading any of these stories or which is the best and the one I should post. I will tell you the prologue/blurb of each of them and a bit of background. You can only vote once but can narrow it down to two if u want Name : Emily Prologue: The flames sprung up around us. We were trapped. I held tightly on to my father sobbing uncontrollably onto his shoulder. He whispered words of comfort into my ear, though neither he nor I believed anything he was saying. It was too late. The boat was going down, and we were going with it. Background: Celeste Young is an accident prone girl who walks into her garden one afternoon to find a girl lying half-dead in the snow. But this girl has a story to tell and a duty to fulfil. And suddenly Celeste is wrapped up in events had happened hundreds of years ago. (this is not the blurb) Second story Name : Claiming Clara Thompson Blurb: The second Clara Thompson was brought into this world Death was on a mission. That girl must die. But claiming Clara Thompson was never going to be easy... Background: Clara Thompson is an orphan with abnormal abilities. Left on the doorstep of her now parents' home Clara has fended for her self most of her life. But there is no ignoring the battle she is destined to fight, and the fate that will eventually befall her. Third book. Name : the chamber of lost souls. Prologue: Somewhere in the world a little boy stirred. He yawned and got up. Which was strange, because it was only three o clock in the morning. So why was this boy awake I hear you ask? Was he going to sneak downstairs to the kitchen and steal the biscuits he knew were hidden in the top drawer? No. He'd like to, but he didn't. Someone had called him. "Bru-no..." The voice leered out of the darkness again. He walked out into the landing. All he wanted to do was run into his bedroom, slam the door and jump into bed. But his legs kept on walking, ignoring their owner. A tall pale figure of a young girl emerged out of the shadows. Bruno tried to scream, but no sound came out. She picked him up like he was merely a piece of coal and leapt up onto the windowsill and together with the now unconscious Bruno she flew away into the night. Please tell me which one!
Erm, these are all pretty good for someone my age... I've seen better, yes, and these can be improved. Idk, I'm neutral.
Second story sounds like the idea or title came for somewhere else lol Emily seems the most interesting I think.
I'd go with Emily because it is the most well written. But if you just turning 12, don't shy away from haters. At 12, I lied about my age to NaNoWriMo, although I didn't get 50,000 words, I got 40,000 and reviewing the story, it wasn't too bad. I also lied about my age to enter the London to Cambridge, no one thought I'd do it; however, I did do it, slowly but steadily. To top that off, I got to one belt before black in Karate one month before I was 13. I had/have to wait until I'm 16 to get black belt. So if you are afraid of haters… I'll slap you soo hard.
@ storallelite the second one came from nowhere but my head. But maybe u read something similar? Idk but if so PLEASE PLEASE TELL ME!!!! And yes Emily is my fave story out of them three.
@ insane paradox, I am not afraid of haters I just don't want people spamming unappreciated comments that don't come under "constructive criticism" if someone says "these stories are crap don't bother" then thats fine and I would rather they told me. But I don't want people spamming stuff about something they probably haven't even bothered to read and just doing it coz they feel like it.
And insane I have quite a few achievements too. I'm just not going to post them because that's not what this thread is for. ( ).-)
Lol it's just the title. I feel like I heard a similar title from another book but don't worry your plot is different I'm pretty sure.
If a 12 year old wrote this and posted it in fan fiction of kaw forums, I will quit writing right now. I do not for half a second believe that either of these two stories are yours. PLEASE POST MORE OF EITHER OF THESE SO I CAN CATCH YOU
@ storallelite I haven't seen a story with a similar title so I haven't copied it but thanks anyway. I don't think I will be changing the title though. @ bellemorte I am not really sure how to reply to that . But I can guarantee these stories came from nowhere but my head. And DON'T QUIT WRITING YOU ARE AMAZING AT IT even better then being a mod
@ bellemorte I know this person very well real life! She has won Many awards for books and has been an excellent author. I am not saying this because I know her. We have both read our stories,helped each other and corrected our mistakes! I have read all 3 stories and all are very well written!
The second one becuz its really interesting and adventures and u know everyone loves a good adventure