"When the Sun Sets," Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010.

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  1. Please post all feedback here. Tell me what I'm doing wrong, what I'm doing right, and other stuff like that. Or chat here. I like the company. =)
     
    #1 *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010
  2. Good story when's the next chapter coming
     
    #2 mathew057, Jul 8, 2010
  3. Thanks. I'll post it now if you'd like.
     
    #3 *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010
  4. it's good I would like to be a character
     
    #4 KyleBrowning, Jul 8, 2010
  5. Thanks Kyle. But...umm...I don't think I'll be accepting characters at this point. I'll let you know when I do.
     
    #5 *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010
  6. ok I like your use of metaphors and sensory details you could really make a living off of this stuff
     
    #6 KyleBrowning, Jul 8, 2010
  7. Thanks! That's my goal! =)
     
    #7 *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010
  8. keep at it and wall me when next chapters out
     
    #8 KyleBrowning, Jul 8, 2010
  9. Alright, will do!
     
    #9 *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010
  10. 2nd chapter also very good wall me when third out
     
    #10 mathew057, Jul 8, 2010
  11. Okay. I'll start right now, bit I probably won't post untill morning. It's late here.
     
    #11 *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010
  12. What time
     
    #12 mathew057, Jul 8, 2010
  13. After 1 in the morning.
     
    #13 *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010
  14. really good
     
    #14 KyleBrowning, Jul 8, 2010
  15. Thanks Kyle!
     
    #15 *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010
  16. yw it reminds me of princess bride by the way she uses the tree
     
    #16 KyleBrowning, Jul 8, 2010
  17. Really? Cool. I've never seen that movie.
     
    #17 *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010
  18. Next chapter awsome!!!@kyle I know right!!
     
    #18 mathew057, Jul 8, 2010
  19. Next chapters awsome!!
     
    #19 mathew057, Jul 9, 2010
  20. I like it, Irin. Really good. Beats my story by a mile.

    ~iDan~
     
    #20 DanCahill, Jul 9, 2010
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