Warriors: Poisonstar's promise Story Sign Ups

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Poisonfang (02), Nov 20, 2011.

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    Shockclan is filled with cats, many of whom you hardly know. You've seen one before breifly but the others you haven't.

    Sign ups

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    Concept:
    Riversong pads through the forest and Poisonfur ran away, She comes to Riversong, not realizing that Riversong is a dark forest cat. " So They took you back Poisonfur ?" Rversong spoke quietly. "Of Course" I responded, swishing my tail. " I'm a Shockclan cat."
    " I was worried you'd forgotten"
    Poisonfur narrowed her eyes, " I came back," She growled. "You don't have to go on about it."
    Riversong sat down. " You've got guts guts", he muttered. "I'lll give you that."
    "What do you want with me ?" Poisonfur wondered why Riversong was back in Poisonfur's dreams. She'd come home. What more did Riversong need ? " I want to help you fufill your destiny." Riversong padded closer. His tail slid across Poisonfur's flank. Poisonfur fidgeted with impactience. "What is my destiny ?''
    " If you obey me and train hard, one day you will lead your Clan."
    "I'll be leader ?" Poisonfur didn't believe it. "But I'm not even close to earning my name yet !"
    Riversong sat down. "Were you hoping that Stormstar would be so impressed by your adventure that he'd let you visit the Moon Fall right away ?"
    Poisonfur flinched. Riversong was close enough to the truth. "I can hunt, " Poisonfur insisted. "And I'm worthy enough." "Stormstar can't reward disobediance," Riversong pointed out.

    The Promise;
    "Will you make me one Promise ?" Riversong's muzzle was a whisker from Poisonfur's. Poisonfur nodded vigorously. "Anything !"
    " I can do more than make you leader. I can give you everything you've ever dreamed of, " Riversong went on. "Power over your clanmates. Power over all the Clans." Poisonfur's eyes widened. "I promise!"
    "Wait." Riversong tipped his head. "You Don't know what your promising yet."
    Poisonfur blinked. "You must promise me," Riversong lowered his voice, "that you will be loyal to your Clan above all other things. What you want for yourself os nothing compared to the needs of your Clan. Nothing, Remember ?" His blue gaze bore inot Poisonfur's green gaze. "Do you make that promise ?" Poisonfur's heart quickened and she looked into Riversong's gaze. "Yes !' She unsheathed her claws. "Yes, I do !"

    Glad to help and Glad to recieve help
     
  2. Shed a little more light?



    Actually, shed a lot more light on this. I can't really tell what your story's gonna be.

    At least write a 5-7 sentence paragraph on what it'll be about.
     
  3. Burningclaw
    6years 6moons 6days
    The original deputy to the long lost thunderclan... Trying to fix his past
    Tall, lean, Black and red fur, long claws, yellow and red eyes
    Where ever my long lost mate is...
    Depressed, short tempered
    None( WAS poisonfang)
    ...

    "I'm on fire!"
    -BC- Blazing since 10
     
  4. Eaglestar
    Female
    13 moons
    Leader of WindClan
    Mate: None....
    Kits: non..
    black she cat with green eyes
    Siblings:
    Poison/Poisonpaw/Poisonfang (Sister)
    Leaf/Leafpaw/LeafStorm/Wolffur/Rosefang (sister)
    Lion/Lionpaw/Lionheart/Forgottenstar (brother)
    Fin/Finpaw/Finriver (brother)
    Lily (sister)
    Mother: Snow
    Father: Fire

    Rosefang
    6 moons
    Female
    ThunderClan warrior
    Mate: Scourge
    Kits: Tigerfur and Bloodwing
    White she cat with rose red tail tip and paws
    Siblings:
    Sisters:
    Poisonfang
    Lily
    Eaglestar
    Brothers:
    Finriver
    Forgottenstar
    Mother:
    Snow
    Father:
    Fire
     
  5. Name: TigerClaw
    Age: 17 moons
    Bio: Was once a happy kit, unknowing of her Father's and Mother's dark past that would one day reign anger and cold in her heart and mind. She loved being around others, until she got interested in her Father's past when she met him in her dream, jealousy of her sister and brother sent her to the Dark Forest, in seek of help. Her Father is TigerStar, TigerClaw was his last kit and was named after him in memory of his "better" side. She actually ended up acting like him.
    Gender: Female
    Looks: Dark tabby with faded amber eyes. Long cured claws of when she was in BloodClan, claws of a pitbull and long fangs of the pitbull teeth. Many scars of her fights when trained in the DarkForest and in her clan, when she had fights with other members.
     
  6. Oops!
    Personality: Fierce, protective, can be funny, serious, quick witted, brave, strong minded.
     
  7. (just FYI, scourge is evil...)
     
  8. Name: OceanEyes
    Age: 14 moons
    Biography: I'm a former kittypet who longed to see what was beyond my garden
    Looks: A small,beautiful silver tabby she cat with long fur and ocean-blue eyes
    Clan: Former deputy,medicine cat, and leader of RainClan
    Mate: none
    Kits: Treekit,Willowkit,Vinekit, and Grasskit
     
  9. Personalty: Ouick-tempered but kind and gentle. Has trouble trusting other cats
     
  10. I can be bothered to do a thing... Just put me in it.
     
  11. Why does this sound alot like Crookedstar's promise? ~Skyheart